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We kissed the stars
On the last night
Of earth,
As the trees fell their leaves
On us,
Like acid rain.
Our lips were dark
With blood
The stains of love
And burning ember flames.
The clouds broke
Into our minds.
Their vapour wings
Touching thought.
Our memories disappeared
Into our hands
And formed a gentle scar
(Of rememberance.)
You trembled as the shadows
Touched.
And all lights
Went out.
We mourned the sky
As the heavens fell.
Our tears tasted
Of secrets and regret
Bittersweet under the light.
You held my hand
Tight
As the insects sung
An elegy of life.
We breathed deep
And held our moment
Like a lover
In our souls.
You whispered my name
Into my spine,
And your lips were cold.
Beneath the broken sky
We spoke a prayer
As though it was a curse.
We kissed the stars
On our last night
On earth.
On the last night
Of earth,
As the trees fell their leaves
On us,
Like acid rain.
Our lips were dark
With blood
The stains of love
And burning ember flames.
The clouds broke
Into our minds.
Their vapour wings
Touching thought.
Our memories disappeared
Into our hands
And formed a gentle scar
(Of rememberance.)
You trembled as the shadows
Touched.
And all lights
Went out.
We mourned the sky
As the heavens fell.
Our tears tasted
Of secrets and regret
Bittersweet under the light.
You held my hand
Tight
As the insects sung
An elegy of life.
We breathed deep
And held our moment
Like a lover
In our souls.
You whispered my name
Into my spine,
And your lips were cold.
Beneath the broken sky
We spoke a prayer
As though it was a curse.
We kissed the stars
On our last night
On earth.
Literature
we're all liars
1.
you are a
poorly written cliché teen drama.
"mum, he got me pregnant."
"your daddy's gonna kill that boy."
no.
just kidding.
there is a jar of salty tears
from all the times
you lost control
but you bleed
that kind of
bullshit,
don't you? yeah,
and your lovers soak it up.
when you look at them
they die inside.
they lie their heads on your chest
and they are thinking,
"oh, how warm he is,"
and they are wondering
if they stare back deeply enough,
would you stay?
but in the end
you and people
don't mix,
much like oil and water.
in the end
you always leave.
gone, like the leaves the wind sweeps
off the streets.
but
Literature
Ficality
We could have been brilliant, you know.
We could have been fabulous together.
(Do you remember that time when we all walked together to get ice cream when we got off school early? We held hands the whole way there. Holding hands was no big deal for you, of course - you did it with a lot of people. But I soon came to think it was a slightly bigger deal when it was with me once I noticed how you grabbed my hand any time we had to walk somewhere farther than across campus. It was my first time at this particular place, self-serve, toppings and all. I loaded mine to the top with all different kinds of fruits. You had chocolate. And lots of it.
Literature
wont
pain slides down
my back like
the hands of
a hated lover
one with whom
I'm so familiar
that I know
to dread
his
coming
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I don't know. it's strange, I know.
I wrote it five minutes ago.
I don't know where it came from.
I give =Inked-Page permission to post in their gallery
I wrote it five minutes ago.
I don't know where it came from.
I give =Inked-Page permission to post in their gallery
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You whispered my name
Into my spine
And your lips were cold.
Wow, stunning. I like this piece for many reasons, the first being that the shortness of the lines works quite well. It's short without being too choppy. Short spelling thing-- "(Of rememberance.)" to "remembrance." ?
I'm not sure if I like the ".." right before the piece shifts. Frankly, it's sort of juvenile. A more reformed "-" or just space might suffice. I also noticed that you didn't use any commas, which is fine, but they might contribute to a smoother flow, especially here:
As the trees fell their leaves
On us
Like acid rain.
Overall, great poem. I hope you like some of what I've said, you definitely don't have to take my advice.
You held my hand
Tight
As the insects sung
An elegy of life.
Stunning
Into my spine
And your lips were cold.
Wow, stunning. I like this piece for many reasons, the first being that the shortness of the lines works quite well. It's short without being too choppy. Short spelling thing-- "(Of rememberance.)" to "remembrance." ?
I'm not sure if I like the ".." right before the piece shifts. Frankly, it's sort of juvenile. A more reformed "-" or just space might suffice. I also noticed that you didn't use any commas, which is fine, but they might contribute to a smoother flow, especially here:
As the trees fell their leaves
On us
Like acid rain.
Overall, great poem. I hope you like some of what I've said, you definitely don't have to take my advice.
You held my hand
Tight
As the insects sung
An elegy of life.
Stunning