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I speak in diagonal lines
and sleep in pastel palettes of secret words.
Every brush and bruised touch
creates waves and ripples onto canvas breaths
and creates the butterfly effect,
painting sweet deaths onto my flesh.
I feel strange tonight.
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Methyss Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
A really good way of expressing it.
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jetgrill Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2009
i like it :D nice...
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leoraigarath Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2009  Professional Writer
"I speak in diagonal lines"
I loved that line... it's really beautiful and set the mood right. This poem in general is really beautiful and delicate.

I hope that the strange feeling you are having is not a bad one, and if it is - :hug: (you know what, even if it's not).
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Aedammair-Feline Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009
Unusual, but I like it.
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CarlMillerPhotos Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009  Professional Photographer
I don't have much poetry in my favorites, but this is worth adding.
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Rosary0fSighs Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2009
thank you.
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mode-de-vie Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009  Student Writer
I love the imagery in this; the last few lines are my favorite, especially when you write:

"creates waves and ripples onto canvas breaths
and creates the butterfly effect,
painting sweet deaths onto my flesh."


That is simply beautiful. :heart:
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Rosary0fSighs Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2009
:hug:
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touch-the-flame Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009   Photographer
I really like the way your mind works. A few lines, but many, many thoughts and ideas.
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Rosary0fSighs Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2009
thank you.
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